As the sun did descend
into the abyss
the moon came to view
our first passionate kiss.
Our mouths start to tango
hearts beating as one
the warmth of our breath
flaming hot as the sun.
Your arms they engulfed me
strongly and secure
I looked in your eyes
mesmerizing and pure.
Enchantments soft whisper
echoed through the sand
freeing its potion
as we walked hand in hand
Your charms diluted me
I could not refuse
our bodies gave in
to the moonlight’s pale hues.
The trees swaying gently
a magical sight
applauding we lovers
making love through the night.
…just chanced at an awkward moment to see your recent post (at work)… wish I could have read it a night :P… I really forgot how it felt like… your poem is very romantic and it brings me back to wanting feelings… every word is sooo alive…
loved it 😉
Thank you Melissa. I can understand that, some things are better in the dark. 😀 Glad you enjoyed it.
that’s very funny…that’s the only thing at best at night 😉
lovely, romantic poem for true lovers.
Thank you Sulekha. New lovers on a sandy beach at night, what else could be so romantic? Glad you enjoyed it.
Very sweet
Thank you SimonMH for your first visit to my blog. Glad you enjoyed it and hope to see more comments from you.
woah! Very sweet and romantic. Lovely post =)
Thank you Fayerydust. for your first visit to my blog. Glad you enjoyed it and hope I see more comments from you.
This is lush and romantic Jen. I needed this today. Thank you. 🙂
Thank you Tameka. I have difficulty writing romantically, so when a gem like this gets noticed I am always so grateful. Glad you enjoyed it.
Hi Jenni –
I love the whole poem but especially appreciate the visuals expressed in the final two verses. The trees gently sway their applause….niceeeeeeee. 🙂
Thank you Charlie. Sometimes the best visuals are the ones that people can overlook. Glad you enjoyed it.
A really romantic moment.. you bring so much to your writings.
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Thank you Jim. I almost sent this one to you for your blog but, then I decided I could write something else. Glad you enjoyed it.
I love the line “Our mouths start to tango” and the line “The trees gently sway their applause”. Very sensual and visually inspiring! Your posts are great and I love getting them in my email. I don’t miss anything that way. 😀
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